Roots as a boar for truffles
almost finds her goal:
I'm forced to move with stealth;
waiting;
she sniffs, blood in the water.
Ian, the above and similar is what raises this above others. A great S.
Thanks.
Gary
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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