Hi Cara,
Thanks, as always friend, for your help**.
CW, Mary :O)
--- cara may <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Mary, Brilliant ending. Perhaps you could play around
> with some line endings eg stanza 1:
> We are often on the verge
> of communication. Wonder if there is anything
> else to say. Hear words well up, see
> messages in the movements of our hands
> or our crossed legs...
> Hope this makes sense. cheers, cara
>
>
> --- Maryann Hazen-Stearns <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > Hi All,
> >
> > Here's another one for today.
> >
> > ~*~
> >
> > Voices From The Edge
> >
> >
> > We are often on the verge of communication.
> > We wonder if there is anything left to say.
> > We hear words well up from our throats,
> > see the expressions voiced by the gesticulations
> > of our hands and crossed legs but we want more
> > or less, depending. We pretend we give a shit.
> >
> > We feel we deserve the truth as we touch the edge
> > of each others ears but never go further than that.
> > We worry what the other will think. We cry
> > about the lack of understanding, we understand
> > nothing about misunderstanding and we cannot
> > comprehend why we do not understand.
> >
> > We dream of connections, try to connect,
> > and hope the wire that hangs from the socket
> > is still alive.
> >
> > ~*~
> >
> > Cheerwell, Mary :O)
> >
> > =====
> > Good Cheer & Be Well,
> > Maryann Hazen-Stearns
> > "Under The Limbo Stick"
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> >
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Good Cheer & Be Well,
Maryann Hazen-Stearns
"Under The Limbo Stick"
http://www.geocities.com/Faerhart/
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