Thanks Marilyn. Would you believe I already cut it
down but I'll try some more. bw, cara
--- Marilyn Injeyan <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > In a
message dated 11/2/01 10:33:57 AM Pacific
> Standard Time,
> [log in to unmask] writes:
>
> I like how you cleverly took the TSE line as your
> springboard. IMHO this
> piece could be pared down to make it stronger. The
> last two lines are very
> strong. Thanks.
>
> Marilyn
>
>
> > Thanks to everyone for previous careful readings
> and
> > tactful suggestions. Don't spare me on this one.
> > Spring-board: 'In the room the women come and go
> > talking of Michelangelo' (Albert Prufrock alias
> TSE).
> >
> >
>
>
>
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