In a message dated 11/3/01 1:18:05 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< ‘Rivers of blood’ were the words he used
a heretic statement then
barrier’s worn less than paper thin
the tinder box is ready again >>
Your end stanza is very strong. I don't think you need like fool in the
first one.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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