Sally, there are some great images here ('a spade of
frost' 'darker than an ace', 'vague with burning'
specially appeal.) I, personally, do not like the
sound of 'condolences' here. Perhaps 'well-wishing'
might work better for me but maybe it's just my
pronunciation.
cheers and thanks, cara
lly James <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >
> Wheels
>
> The wheeled earth spins
> like firework sparks on a November night
> turning soil with a spade of frost
>
> A glitter in the black
>
> In the minds rough passage
> a thought darker than an ace
> stares in the face of silence
> falls like an icicle
> cuts like a blade unsharpened
> Blunt as an elbow it revolves
> in the storm's unseen eye
> catching time like a lost shadow
>
> The moon half smiles
> a wicked look
> conceals herself
> behind the mists of tomorrow
> The sun vague with burning
> singes a mountain range
> streams across the abyss
>
> The turning wheel stops
> offers no condolences
> losing tract of time and motion
> Spins in another direction
> as tides turn and moon wanes
>
> A merry go round of numbers
>
> I gamble with words
> other worlds
> Watch them gyrate
> evolve
>
> Self destruct.
>
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