Hi Gary,
Very good use of juxtaposition - I think that might be the term, or is it
parallelism???? Or comparison???? Whatever......the city lines
back-to-back with the country lines, very good.
Yeah, I need my second cup...
CW, Mary :O)
--- garydawg <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Country, Cityside
>
> Here among these tall structures
> I somehow feel at home.
> I imagine
>
> each taxi horn
> rooster's crow
>
> screech of brake,
> mouse and owl
>
> train whistle,
> cattle's low
>
> siren,
> coyote's howl
>
> somehow I feel at home
> but not home enough
> to keep me
> among these tall structures
> where I do not belong.
>
> October with Judy and Scio: Homepage:
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>
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>
> Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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