Wow! Yeh! I really love the way the "personal poem/love poem of exitica and
erotica and the shop announcements contrast as they follow each other (how
the two differnt registers of language alternate). The effect of its mouth
music makes my mind spin - and shows me how much the personal and the
business side of life do combine.
Bob, thanks. You got all your requests. Anyone who gives such a kind
review should
Gary
who got got up in the exotic with that on the morrow
October with Judy and Scio: Homepage:
http://gardawg.homestead.com/homestead.html,
Submissions: http://www.writershood.com/index.html
Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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