Once upon a time your walks were a ramble.
Walt Whitman style!
These days your walks are becoming a stroll.
Lynn, thanks. I'm sure they will be stomping through the tulips again, but
for now we are lazed back a bit
Wonder if it might be worth
repeating 'each' at the beginning of each stanza
and inserting the indef. art 'a rooster's crow','a
cattle's low'.
Cara, thanks. Seriously I have not decided. Thinking on it, but still lean
away from articles as not me.
Gar
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