No, you seem to have a technical problem here Gillian because the delicacy
of effect relies on there not being usually more than two words (very very
rarely three) in a line thereby mono-stressed with an occasional duple beat
( like, that's 'as in', your opening: 'SEV'n of NINE' I'd scan it [d'ya
reckon, Robin?] but that awfully clumpy 'the 1990's attempt' oh no that
won't do)
And a word to the wise about formatting, look what's happened to the layout
in plain text as my mailer's converted it. Careful now.
david b
----- Original Message -----
From: Gillian Savage <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Tuesday, February 20, 2001 11:57 AM
Subject: Re: "definitions" of My Poessays
> Re-arranged
>
> Seven of Nine
> was surely
> the 1990's attempt
> to bring this nexus
> up to date
> and feminise it?
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>
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> (note how a wedge
>
> was driven in
>
> to make way
>
> for her in Hugh!)
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>
>
>
> Hmmm?
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>
>
> Yaaaawn....
>
>
>
> NB: appropriated from L Kirby. Does this infringe copyright?
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