I just want to express my admiration for your poem, Dominic; if I as yet
fail to understand whether there is an actual referent for your words, this
is secondary besides the sense of precise imagination (that sponge-like or
coral continuum), wit ("worm of worm/run rings around the commune") and
sheer verbal delight (who could have thought "reciprocity" contains
"recipes"?) that almost invades the reader. I really enjoyed this: any
authorial notes toward further elucidation?
Cheers
Martin
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