inkling of a thirst...doesn't that make you inkle?
Steve KK
At 9:22 PM +1000 16/7/2001, geraldine mckenzie wrote:
>> The Next Poem
>>
>>How much better it seems now
>>than when it is finally done-
>>the unforgettable first line,
>>the cunning way the stanzas run.
>>
>>The rhymes soft-spoken and suggestive
>>are barely audible at first,
>>an appetite not yet acknowledged
>>like the inkling of a thirst.
>
>Robin
>
>Oddly enough, this is the first poem I began. Didn't get past the first two
>stanzas. Absolutely awful.
>
>Geraldine
>
>
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