Sir Robin, there was a typo in the 3rd line anyway, mes regrets. Will
this help -
Dear EDitor, NEDGE: this IS my first EFfort:
I SHOWED it to KENT and he TOLD me to STUFF it
and SEND it STRAIGHT OVer to LITTle Miss MUFFet,
who PUBlishes FRAGrant and POWerful EFForts."
- Dr. Seuss
On Sat, 14 Jul 2001 02:30:32 +0100 you said:
>Henry:
>
>I may be coming over all NeoFormalist (or missing the point, or it's too
>late at night) but ...
>
>> Dear Editor, Nedge: this is my first effort:
>> I showed it to Kent and he told me to stuff it
>> and it send straight over to "little Miss Muffet,
>> who publishes fragrant and powerful efforts."
>>
>> THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! NO NEED TO RETURN MS.!!!
>
>Lines 2 and 3 seem basically loose dactylic but I can't get the rhythms in 1
>and 4.
>
>Help? I can just about fit line one in, but not line four.
>
>Robin
>
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