Another I've heard is to remove the last
>line and make it the poem's title (if you really have to have it).
I have such trouble with titles. I usually settle for the not altogther
satisfactory solution of making the title a line or a word from one--am I
really summarizing the essense of a the piece by doing that?
This is interesting. Last line could contain your strongest statement on
the subject of the piece. I'm going to try that.
For me
>the best editor is time.
Yes
>it?
>
>CH
>
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>to get to it
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