Nicholas - I was thinking as I drove around today (I know, juggling two
tasks is dangerous) prompted by the fact that my little poem was stitched
together from odd bits of adding one more odd bit to the end. I usually
don't go adding to poems, quite the opposite in fact, I usually cut back.
But from here, if I'm not blinded by my own headlights, I think the addition
works. I'd be interested in your opinion.
Thank you
:fp
prison
walls
the wind
and sun
exits
all covered
in time
the way out
music
ya hear
in a heart
beat in
a heart
beat
worlds crumble
do everything
do nothing
:fp
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