Nicholas - I really liked your poem - of the ram and the hook, etc. - The
format seemed to lose itself on my machine. Is it a prose poem? The first
par came like that, ten te second was full of longish lines juxtaposed with
short (very), and finally a paragraph of left margin, ragged right. (I know
justifying doesn't work on email, but the first par seemed justified
enough.)
I'd like to keep it and use it in classes if that's okay with you. That's
why I am interested in getting your intended format strictly correct.
Andrew
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