on 22/12/01 10:23 PM, david.bircumshaw at [log in to unmask]
wrote:
> I'm never live down those commas!
Know how you feel.
>As I think I said, I deliberately posted a
> 'just-writ' first draft, only 20 minutes old. When I do the first
> 'roughcast' I either splay punctuation all over the place or put in none at
> all, and then clean up the mess later.
Same here.
>
> I am chuckling about it.
>
> The heating will kick in at noon. Taipei, eh, for Christmas? Nice!
Visiting Australian friends. But yes it will be fascinating. I know Hk and
mainland China but never been to the 'ilha formsa'.
>Really we've had a very mild winter, blackbirds were still about in early >
December,
> as well as drowsy late in their lives dying flies.
Ah well. Thought I'd post a winter and summer verse for us all - though I do
suspect it's only thee and me about at the moment. First is Louis MacNeice's
poem and something of mine about summer (new and thereby prone to the same
living down you've been through).
Glad yr heating is coming on.
Cheers,
Jill
Snow
The room was suddenly rich and the great bay-window was
spawning snow and pink roses against it
Soundlessly collateral and incompatible:
World is suddener than we fancy it.
World is crazier and more of it than we think,
Incorrigibly plural. I peel and portion
A tangerine and spit the pips and feel
The drunkenness of things being various.
And the fire flames with a bubbling sound for the world
Is more spiteful and gay than one supposes -
On the tongue on the eyes on the ears in the palms of onešs hands -
There is more than glass between the snow and the huge roses.
Louis MacNeice
Summer
canals, parking lots
a hard diamond sky
chasing down the ball
sandstone and steel
scouring fixtures
tracts at the edge
a quick word
then godšs silence
and pain
on the surface
the slow cancers
nesting grounds
along the cliff edge
white birds, white sky.
Jill Jones
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Jill Jones
50 Ruby Street
Marrickville NSW 2204
AUSTRALIA
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