Joe
there's no doubt your two stanzas dig deeper, work better, & have more to
say than the Cope,
but I still sorta go with Gabe in not being too bothered by the other,
which, as I suggested, might be more like a pop song than a poem, but
'funny'? well, yeah, I think so, or at least I did laugh...
Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta Canada T6G 2E5
(h) [780] 436 3320 (b) [780] 492 0521
http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm
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