Hi Matthew,
Terrific poem -- reminded me of Peter Greenaway's film
'Prospero's Books'. Thanks for posting.
The only bit which looks unnecessary is the descriptive 'above
their heads' in the final stanza, somehow . . . unless this is an
important feature of the painting? (By who, by the way? Keen
to check it out). Seems to round off this frieze image on a slightly
flat note . . . ?
Andy
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