Wonderful rendition, steve. Does yr own poetry use this form? Wanna post
one as example?
Andrew
>
> a poem
>
> i am just back
> from a marvellous
> family weekend
>
> where i nearly
> fell in love with a blonde
> astrophysicist
>
> and having spent
> four hours in the pub
> this afternoon
>
> noticed
> somebody mentioning
> ashbery
>
> he has two poems
> in the new lrb which
> i am not keen to read
>
> he strikes me as
> a carpet poet reading his verse is like
> struggling through
>
> a headful of gunge
> i debate whether he is really
> a poet at all
>
> but then
> i didnt read his work before he got famous
> i prefer frank o'hara
>
> who can be
> the most enjoyable fun
> and can write
>
> a poem
>
>
>
>
>
>
>On Mon, 17 Jul 2000 16:23:15 -0400
>Philip Nikolayev <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>>> Douglas, try a rewrite/spacial reorientation. Philip
>
>
>
>regards
>
>steve
>
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