Good point Francis, you're right : must remember to switch brain on before
writing. i've had a think : how about scar/scaur: a steep craggy outcrop of
a mountain or cliff. if i use the first then i get the dual impression wont
i.
vycar
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From: Francis M (HaSS) <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Monday, April 03, 2000 10:25 AM
Subject: RE: haiku
> Is 'tarn' what you mean? I understand a tarn to be a small lake, so I
can't
> see how the flowers can be 'upon' it, unless they're waterlilies, which
> doesn't fit the rest of the poem.
>
> Best wishes
>
> Matthew Francis
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> 01443 482856
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