Is 'tarn' what you mean? I understand a tarn to be a small lake, so I can't
see how the flowers can be 'upon' it, unless they're waterlilies, which
doesn't fit the rest of the poem.
Best wishes
Matthew Francis
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-----Original Message-----
From: dave [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
Sent: 02 April 2000 03:33
To: poetryetc
Subject: haiku
i don't know if this fits the haiku meter, but then, it never bothered
Ginsberg
Flowers upon a forlorn tarn
brighten the weathered rock
like a tired mans dreams.
vycar
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