Dear Erminia,
What if you simply ended your poem here:
-fp
(Diving II)
"I want him to win ( me ) "
5 seconds and he disappears
into my depths
good entry fine push fresh
he jumps off the platform very deep high
after a single twist
with such a balance moving through
spaces of crowds of stillness
wet muscles juvenile
hips this one standing on his tips
the arms stretched out hanging up in his perfected
posture
after the initial wobble
clear entry
oh,
enter me
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Frank Parker
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