I'd say it's not haiku but it is a delightful poem, vycar.
JohnB
On 2 Apr 00 at 3:32, dave wrote:
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> i don't know if this fits the haiku meter, but then, it never bothered
> Ginsberg
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> Flowers upon a forlorn tarn
> brighten the weathered rock
> like a tired mans dreams.
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> vycar
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